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| Coco Kintner 2006-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseFirst of all, thanks for your reviews. Secondly, that's so adorable! I'm glad you loved your Grandpa and I'm happy you remember him! That's so great. I love my grandpa too. Thirdly, I loved how you had that little 'chorus' stanza, if you will. Great job! |
| Princess-anna57 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuse*bursts into tears* my grandfather died Wednesday, and so, all the memories just hit hard. Ohh, thanks for sharing your poem. It's very well written, and I could just feel so so much. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |