-throws a temper tantrum and pounds my fists on the ground-
Don't end it there! I want more of the Jesse! And Molly!
I like that one title with the S.E.X. in it. -nod nod-
So hurry up with the sequel! (After November of course)!

Really cute story, but the end is a total let down.
What happens with Jesse? You didn't even bother to conclude the side plot, much less the main plot!

Great story! I enjoyed reading it, but seriously? the ending? I didn't like, wanna now why? I don't like it when good stories end, that's why!! xD
Can't wait to read the Sequel.

Ahahaha that was great, the whole thing. xD Although why I waited until now to read it, I don't really know...just kept putting it off. Whatever. Once I started, I just keep reading, ignored IMs from friends until it was done. ;) It was a lot of fun to read. :D Great job. :D

this neds a lasst chapter, because this story is great, and you cant not continue and let Danny Boy and Addisony boy not have some awesome sex, date, sex, and climax,

This chapter wasnt as well edited as your other ones, lol this comment it probably full of spelling errors though :P, anyway still good though, just needs more editting

Makea sequal..watch the invisible clock move, when i "snap my fingers" you will have the strong urge to make a sequal...becuz the story was so awesome~~...oh yea, *snap*

OMG!!

OH MY GOSH WTF!..TnT...why did you end here? you BEAST.your TORTURER...You...GLORIOUS auntie..@w@...♥ I love this story, it was so lolz! GAH..why'd you stop here? it hurts..ToT...I wanted to know how the date went!! update soon! I'm gonna go stalk your other stories now! *adds you to author alert*

GLORIOUS!

AW! i LOVE this!! hahaha! Addison is the type of person that i'd hug...and give a muffin to...

OMG RELLY? THERES A SEQUAL?! No der isnt... i didnt find it... U BETTER PUT IT UP SOON! OR... u will.. be... atacked.. by... umm... RABID... hm... PLATIPUSSES! YEA RABID PLATIPI! SO... U better... CUZ THIS STORY WUZ ADORABLE I COULD READ IT OVER AND OVER DEFINATLY MY ALL TIME FAV! or the platipi will gets u...

DEFINATELY make a sequel.
Please?
Get in it, ASAP.
The ending was highly unsatisfactory, otherwise.

Ahahahaha! The most pointless and strange thing ever. But i absolutely adore it! Great, great job! Much love!

...I love you! This story twas short, but I really liked it~ Short, sweet and straight to the point. :3
Now, 'm off to read your other works!
~thewritingkit

idk what to name it but u HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL! unless u already did...idk...i should check ur page first lol