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Reviews For: Domination

Lady of Beltane
2008-08-14
ch 1,
abuseQuite nice! ;)
Bek
2006-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abusem...hot!
x.Poison.x
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story, I like your wrting style, it has a smiliarity to mine. You're a great writer, keep it up., Poison x..x
Strawberry Mei
2006-10-07
ch 1,
abuseOh my. That was incredibly hot. The only thing I can really critique about it was that sometimes, the dialogue would make the rest of the sentence redundant, like in “WE’RE HEADING HOME NOW,” I yell in Dominic and Jeremy’s ears over the loud music, the caps can be done without.But my, that was really hot. Thank you for making my night. ^^
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