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| Lady of Beltane 2008-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseQuite nice! ;) |
| Bek 2006-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abusem...hot! |
| x.Poison.x 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story, I like your wrting style, it has a smiliarity to mine. You're a great writer, keep it up., Poison x..x |
| Strawberry Mei 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my. That was incredibly hot. The only thing I can really critique about it was that sometimes, the dialogue would make the rest of the sentence redundant, like in “WE’RE HEADING HOME NOW,” I yell in Dominic and Jeremy’s ears over the loud music, the caps can be done without.But my, that was really hot. Thank you for making my night. ^^ |