Reviews for The Faerie, the Giant and the Prince

Reviews For: The Faerie, the Giant and the Prince

Kayla Christine 2006-10-28 ch 4,	abuseThese two chapters are wonderful, full of description! You really get into the faeries mind, which is also great, and you get to know more about things that you may not have known before. Overall nice work!! By the way, I'm not sure if I told you or if you knew but Chasing Princes was updated and will be again very soon!!
Alteng 2006-10-20 ch 4,	abuseThe borosion is an interesting enough of a creature. There must not be many of them, if they must dine on royal blood. there is usually one royal family per city or habitation. It was a nice little action scene there, but the word borosion was a little over used, and you could replace it with monster or some what not a couple of times. You also show that Dhyanis is of royal blood as well. I like how you did this. Nice move on that one. And I would have been most surpise if the prince slept through all that. Of course, Atish would. Gee! I guess the world would have to explode before it woke him.
Alteng 2006-10-20 ch 3,	abuseI think my character Alteng and Dhyanis would have an enjoyable time explaining gruesome things to each other to see if they could freak one or the other out. That was amusing. You are doing well at not describing the faerie's methods of magic and she is keeping it secretative. Of course, I would have thought as some as the prince found out that Dhyanis is one of the faerie folk, he would have wanted to throttle her, because he feels that magic is what is the trouble with the land. So, are giants rather shunned in this society. Is that why Atish doesn't admit to it?
Alteng 2006-10-20 ch 2,	abuseYeah, she is a sharp little piece, and maybe things will move along well here, now, because they have some semblance of privacy so they can talk. I can't help but feel for the giant. he seems to want to help out the little lady. I also how you refer to how secretive fairies can be, and as Narrinda is fond of saying, "Big things can come in small packages."
Alteng 2006-10-20 ch 1,	abuseWell, it looks like you have introduced all three of your main characters in your possible plot in the first chpater. Your characters have very well defined characteristics, and I look forward to seeing where you will go with this.
Faerie Energy 2006-10-17 ch 3,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful writing! The reasoning behind each character's actions is completely unclear, I have no idea why they are following her to Faerie Land and Faerie Land could have a more creative name, but other than that I find no fault. Really, a glorious start. Contine soon! With all due respect, Faerie Energy
Kayla Christine 2006-10-08 ch 2,	abuseWow short chapter, but obviously neccesary and it shows some of the faerie's personality. Nice job. Kayla Christine
Kayla Christine 2006-10-08 ch 1,	abuseNice start, definately good for a first story! But one thing... " His eyes were dark brown with a speck of green in it." Would she really be so perceptive as to notice the green speck when all she's being able to focus on is his massive size? Other than that, great story and I'm off to read the second chapter! Kayla Christine Oh, and thanks for adding me to your favorites list, and I'm glad you like Chasing Princes!

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