I like this one, it's gentle and has a point and is significant without ranting or pointing fingers. A delicate piece of writing to be contemplated as both meaningful and decorative. Write more of these!

So pretty! I love your poem :)

Good points here, and well written. Nice work and definatley keep writing.

that was pretty cool.. :) keep it up!

-llazuli-

Love may be stronger than hate, but is love stronger than fear? Is trust stronger than suspicion?