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-helpsmethroughtheday-
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abusewow. completely loved it.
Allerleirauh
2006-12-13
ch 1,
abuseShort and to the point. Perfect.
alice is dying
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseShort and sweet. Just the right length-it perfectly describes the feelings of many people-like you're just this fake, and if anyone knew the REAL you, they'd tear you down and push you out of the spotlight.

Darling, this is gorgeous.

I love it.

♥ Alice
classic violet
2006-10-12
ch 1,
abuseI love the way this is written. just like, straight out not all choppy. short and sweet.
by His blood
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abusejust gorgeous, as always. it says so much in so few words, and that's beautiful. i love doing this, pretending to be someone else & drifting into another time, because it takes me away from myself, if only for a moment ... you captured this perfectly. beautiful, as usual.

♥ alison
Guardrail
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseNice, great rhythm to this. Great work, I love it.
polka dots and addictions
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseshort, but its got alot in it. you've painted a beautiful poem here & it creates an interesting image. nice work. ~Bex xx
A. J. Krautwurst
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseshort -- it really only states one thing, but your descriptions are so vivid that it makes an entire scene jump to life in my head.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abusewow...this is haunting. so many images jump to my head with these words - it takes talent to do that. keep it up :D
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