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| -helpsmethroughtheday- 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusewow. completely loved it. |
| Allerleirauh 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseShort and to the point. Perfect. |
| alice is dying 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. Just the right length-it perfectly describes the feelings of many people-like you're just this fake, and if anyone knew the REAL you, they'd tear you down and push you out of the spotlight. Darling, this is gorgeous. I love it. ♥ Alice |
| classic violet 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI love the way this is written. just like, straight out not all choppy. short and sweet. |
| by His blood 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abusejust gorgeous, as always. it says so much in so few words, and that's beautiful. i love doing this, pretending to be someone else & drifting into another time, because it takes me away from myself, if only for a moment ... you captured this perfectly. beautiful, as usual. ♥ alison |
| Guardrail 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseNice, great rhythm to this. Great work, I love it. |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseshort, but its got alot in it. you've painted a beautiful poem here & it creates an interesting image. nice work. ~Bex xx |
| A. J. Krautwurst 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseshort -- it really only states one thing, but your descriptions are so vivid that it makes an entire scene jump to life in my head. |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abusewow...this is haunting. so many images jump to my head with these words - it takes talent to do that. keep it up :D |