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| fairy_dust2222 2006-10-22 ch 1,  | Nice poem! I really liked the images in your poem, escpecially your descriptions of the creature itself. I really liked the line "Its obsidian wings beat heavy at the air,its ivory-colored claws glistened red from its earlier kill in the Great Woods". Great job. |