hm, interesting concept~ good work

keep writing

You've posted it! :) YAY!! :p

Well, you know perfectly well what I think of this little piece of written art... (You do, right...?)

Anyway, it really is a poem that lingers on... One that makes you think. (My poor brain... :p Remember the song... :p)

Beautiful written! Really, I just don't know how to describe what I feel while reading it... It has some real power behind the words! Wonderfull!

Hugies K

Interesting little poem. It's confusing, yet makes perfect sense. The last line, is of course, the part that makes you think, and it really made me think "Hm..." The twist is neat, that most people, when they fear life, they cease to exist and live in a dream of their own making, yet in this it is the oppisite. Sometimes I wish I would be so afraid of a dream that I'd rather live with the harshness of reality...