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| Lyn Kinsei 2006-10-08 ch 1,   | That was good, but it leaves me with one question. Is this it, or is there more? Good job. Rachel |
| Sargent Pepper 2006-10-08 ch 1, | This is good, but I would try adding something else to it. Keep writing. I have to give you kudos on this. Joey |