I like to start with the first piece that an author has posted and see if it ever changes.

Here we have the start of reading between the lines, the overlappign words that have double triple meanings in them.

I'm in love with your writing already.

from: echo

p.s. I adore thoughts in parenthesis.

ok, a little creepy but nice, I really like the begining.

i'm glad i don't suffer from angst, because the suffering that you portrayed in this is just overwhelming and breathtaking, even for just a few words.

"my legs are an open wound under your fingers)"

damn.

amazing. gorgeous writing. just all together breathtaking.

i ached for the moments we were apart, your words & i.

.yes.

our dirtylittlesecret.