...um, Joana...?

Suh-mex-Y!! ^_^ Muy muy muy bien. It had a beat to it, or something of the sort, y was muy good. Don't have much to say, except good writing on this one (like all the rest, damn it), and do continue to write like this. ^_^;
-Shadray

oh this one is definately going on my favourites list... I love the idea behind this poem, and even how you describe the machines and everything. it was quite sad. it started off very well also, the 'fake animals' made me want to read on to figure out what you meant.

keep up the great work!

I think there's a mayan creation myth that goes something like that with wooden people and no heart... oh thats sad. Sometimes I think that's how the future will be, so much electronics that there's no room for thoughts and feelings :(