|Reviews for Istar v2: A demon's demon|
| Van Quatra 8/8/11 . chapter 15
this and the first one are really good stories, i hope you update soon... unless you aren't anymore. and if that is true that sucks. anyway awesome.
| le roi des pirates 10/19/06 . chapter 8
It's actually a bit...wierd? Because well, that's kind of..me? Haha, it's like watching a film of yourself you've never seen before. It's all good though. I'm so freakin' glad you decided to post I star 2! I smile. _
| Adaku 10/17/06 . chapter 3
Why'd did you have to review Night Slayer? I'll hopefully continue the story if I have time. Oh, right thanks for the review, and keep at it with your story. _
| Adaku 10/17/06 . chapter 2
Fictionpress has been out forever, I never thought I would miss it so much. -_-
Hey, I have a character who's named Kai. Whatever, this is getting interesting so far. I'll be reading more. Till next time
| pandakitree 10/9/06 . chapter 6
Are you sure you put this in the right story? It seems like this chapter should be put in the first version of Istar.
| pandakitree 10/9/06 . chapter 3
You should think about using pagebreaks. They help to switch from one scene to another.
If you don't know how to, when you upload a story, it shows you what it looks like. It kinda looks like when you're editing your profile. You can add pagebreaks there.
So, far, I am enjoying this version of Istar. You may want to extend the chapters though. They're kinda o n the short side.
It's okay if there aren't as many because you update pretty quickly. So the wait for a chapter would be balanced.
Also, are you sure it's "Daemons"? Or do you mean demons? You may want to look at that.