this and the first one are really good stories, i hope you update soon... unless you aren't anymore. and if that is true that sucks. anyway awesome.

Yay!

It's actually a bit...wierd? Because well, that's kind of..me? Haha, it's like watching a film of yourself you've never seen before. It's all good though. I'm so freakin' glad you decided to post I star 2! I smile. _

Why'd did you have to review Night Slayer? I'll hopefully continue the story if I have time. Oh, right thanks for the review, and keep at it with your story. _

Fictionpress has been out forever, I never thought I would miss it so much. -_-

Hey, I have a character who's named Kai. Whatever, this is getting interesting so far. I'll be reading more. Till next time

adaku-chan

Are you sure you put this in the right story? It seems like this chapter should be put in the first version of Istar.

You should think about using pagebreaks. They help to switch from one scene to another.

If you don't know how to, when you upload a story, it shows you what it looks like. It kinda looks like when you're editing your profile. You can add pagebreaks there.

So, far, I am enjoying this version of Istar. You may want to extend the chapters though. They're kinda o n the short side.

It's okay if there aren't as many because you update pretty quickly. So the wait for a chapter would be balanced.

Also, are you sure it's "Daemons"? Or do you mean demons? You may want to look at that.

Dhalia