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| Weapon 2006-12-16 ch 1,   | It's good to read something both beautiful and terrible at the same time. Especially with your descriptive prowess. |
| Amber Snow 2006-10-08 ch 1, | Mon... Dieu... This is amazing. It's beyond that. Your words melt together like music, like they were always meant to be put together in this way. And you're only a year older than myself... Yet have somehow created this. Wow. I really want to give constructive criticism, but it sounds like a published poem in every way. And a beautiful published poem at that. Parts of it were truly bold and experimental. It makes you think. It forces an image of the woman into your head. I'd better stop now or I'll be praising it for hours. |