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| from beneath the bell jar 2007-04-07 ch 1,  | abuseOmg this has to go on my c2. I knew I would love it as soon as I saw the title. The first stanza is so provocative - makes me wonder why she's crying and what made her skip town to the city. Very very good piece - tells a great story. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. it reminds me of my drive home last night (which i will be writing about soon). fantastic job buddy. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseMarvelous overall concept. I like how you've contrasted 4 seperate worlds in this. City, country, stars, and dreams, all thouroughly distinct things, and yet you wrap them all together wonderfully. Very thought provoking, and exhilerating if the reader continues thinking from the ending. Good write. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseOn Wednesday night, Krissy and I drove around in the country for almost two hours watching the lightening, listening to music, and talking about life. I had to keep going somewhere. I couldn't stop. This poem captures that feeling precisely. ♥Christine |
| Japyra 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting piece about travelling in the human. I liked the creative word useage as well. |
| autumnmurder 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm in awe. Incredible! |