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Reviews For: I go to School

sicklysnowwhite
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abusethe beginning isnt anything like the rest of it, but i like that you said i die/i love school. ironic. simple. short.
Mr. Magic
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abuseDescribes my school life perfectly. except for the bus part. I don't ride the bus. Good job! as usual...hope to see more! there better be more. Or else I'm going to...I don't know. I'll think of something later.

Magic
capriciousguy
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseyour right, the intro is a little off, and i thing you should cut out the i breathe i hurt i break. and make it i live i die i love school. funny. the repeditive'ness' is good, but i think that when your reading it you just end up skipping over the 'I' and just reading the verb. live, breathe, hurt, break, die, love school kinda thing, you know?
Da Vinci at Work
2006-11-03
ch 1,
abuseHaha.

"I love school" goes after

"I live
I hurt
I break
I die"

Simple, comical, and cool!
Microwrite
2006-10-30
ch 1,
abusei think it was good but it draged in the middle. i don't get the die part. but all an all i liked it
Sakka-Fenikkusu
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseSweet.
ignominy
2006-10-10
ch 1,
abuseits kind of almost sorta a list but kind of a list that tells a story. nice though, congrants
An-Author-At-Heart
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseNice! It's a good and thorough representation of school. I agree with you - here here! LOL I enjoyed it. Btw, thanks SOO much for the reviews, especially on "Hopelessly Devoted". I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
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