good and detailed... lol. great concept of the body bag of skin. thanks for the review.

No matter how many times I've tried to write something on this subject matter, I can never think of the right words to use to express the feelings of the character in the story. And I think you did a good job on the emotions in this story because to me it's just so real. I love the image of the "skin body bag" and I really think that's something that people can relate to but it's so different from other things I've heard before which makes it so much better. I think you did a wonderful job.And thank you for the review you gave me and for pointing out that I had my poem in the fiction section, I'm so absent-minded that I never would have noticed it otherwise.

This story was disturbing in the beginning, but it still interests me. I kind of think it's weird though, because I also have a story called Crazy. They have totally different plots though.