|Reviews for Silver Hymns|
| malibabi13 10/11/06 . chapter 1
i likey this un it's very symbolic
| MsArtful 10/9/06 . chapter 1
I like the meaning behind this poem, it's sensitive and the language carries strong undercurrents reflective of emotions such as frustration and inadequacy. Perhaps, however, in the last line, say "imperfections" or some other word, as I feel "irregularities" lets it down, as it is a word which is more technical and which one stumbles over in trying to make it fit the poems rhythm.
A lovely poem, well done.