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NyghtRayne 2009-03-16 . chapter 21
Please please please tell me that you plan on finishing this story...i will be uber ubset if i dont get to see what happens to the three...its a great story...and i would love to see this published..i would buy like 100 of them! lol...i cant wait to see what happens...please update *puppy dog pout*

Rayne
JerryOnigiri 2009-02-08 . chapter 21
I hope you update soon. Thanks!
Evvy daVain 2008-12-16 . chapter 21
Ah! Just finished 21, and it killed me. The story's fast pace and Chris's ever changing make out choice keeps me captivated! definately one of the best reads one here! I can't wait to see who he chooses(three some anyone?)!!
Rubadub 2008-04-25 . chapter 21
First off: this story seriously almost made me pee myself in some parts. It's fast paced and light despite the fact that Chris gets himself in way too deep sometimes.

I did notice that you've got some errors with grammar here and there. The one I noticed most was that you use -your- a lot instead of -you're- as a contraction for -you are-. Nothing big seeing as a lot of us writers struggle with proper grammar. I don't know about you but I hate it with a burning passion the majority of the time.

Regardless, this story is a keeper and I like your style :]

Will you be updating soon? I noticed it has been a while since the last chapter was added. I hope you're still writing it! I'd be sad if I never got to figure out who Chris finally ends up with. I personally think he should end up with Wes and then have Bone and Ian get back together. Everybody wins! Except for whatshisname. You know... Bone's best friend? Maybe he and his creepily dog-like personality can hook up with Chewy (that was the dog that was supposed to chew off the evil wench's boob, right?)... Heh.

Well, regardless of whether or not whatshisface (WHY CAN'T I REMEMBER HIS NAME?) ends up partaking in **... I hope you continue this and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

-Nub

P.S. You go on my Author Alert list :0
-hides in the bushes like a stalker-
I shall wait in ambush for the next chapter!
Back of Beyond 2008-04-21 . chapter 21
Great story, hope you get around to updating it again sometime. :]
Adorkable 2007-10-05 . chapter 1
I really like this story. You've done an awesome job. Yep, I'm dead serious. Keep writing. NOW! New chapter! *twitch* And you know it's a good story if I say it's good since I'm not a huge slash lover. Still, slash IS pretty hot. Blah blah blah. Keep writing, tramp!
Midnights Scream 2007-08-27 . chapter 21
I feel kinda bad for Chris having to choose but i can understand and he got his friend back! Food fights are amazing. You do realize that starting a food fight was task 8 right? Just wondering, but I really like this story. Amazing!
Liviania 2007-08-27 . chapter 21
The mashed potatoes line was excellent. What are friends for, besides helping avoid nasty situations? (And for perhaps suggesting one should date inanimate objects?)

Livi
ks darkstorm 2007-08-27 . chapter 21
Lol

loved it.
nonaccount 2007-08-26 . chapter 21
Pick Wes! Pick Wes! Wes seems sweeter than Bone and I like their interaction together.
mia5081 2007-08-26 . chapter 21
Ooh, Chris is in one big, bad situation lol. Loved the chapter, and please choose Wes! For some reason, I don't trust Bone =(
Update soon!
~Mia
C. Khafre 2007-08-26 . chapter 21
I hope it's Wes! : P
Esquirella 2007-08-26 . chapter 21
OMG! Chris is becoming quite the playa!
Hmmm... 2007-08-25 . chapter 20
Who I think is better for him and who I want him to end up with are two different people. ^.^ Wes for the former and Bone for the latter.
Midnights Scream 2007-08-25 . chapter 20
Chrissexual. that makes me giggle. And Wes and Chris are awesome and right now I don't mind who he ends up with. *smiles*this is amazing and I hope you update quicker because this is amazing. So much drama and I wonder what Bone's going to do.:)
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