|Reviews for Lies I Told|
| Halcyon Impulsion 12/2/10 . chapter 1
The concept of this and the overall feel of this is great. I feel like it's a little rough around the edges-like the language transitions could be more smooth-but as I said, overall this quite a profound piece.
| Leaving Here 6/10/07 . chapter 1
oh, thats sad.
makes me tearful.
cos i wish i had a guy,
that thought of me like that.
this is magical and true.
totally added to ny fav's.
this is great.
you have skills.
| Hutchy 10/9/06 . chapter 1
Well done, sir, and good luck.
For such a simple poem, you managed to touch me.
| BearHeart 10/9/06 . chapter 1
There is nothing wrong with this poem. It's quite good. I just feel that it lacks that indefineable something that makes your work really special(at least, what I see in your work). Maybe the list aspect limits it or even defines it in such a way as to overshadow your creative sparkle. Honestly, I don't know what it is. Maybe it's just me, right now, at this point in time. I can tell you, though, I always look forward to the "Alerts" for Bronzeage.