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Reviews For: Falling

The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
2006-10-09
ch 1,
wow ... this is amazing. the imagery, the dark emotions, the subject, everything ... it's just perfection.

'dead before landing'

the format works excelently in this peice. i'm inlove with the last line. keep it up!
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