Oh, dear, I disagree-this chapter was .very. interesting. Her teacher! forgetting the details of the party! losing her phone and all that information! i can feel that suspense in my bones, babe! I can hardly wait for more of this delicious read.

I saw very few spelling or grammatical errors, and the plot seems to be developing nicely. Great job-update soon.

♥ Alice

THis chapter is tons better than your first one. Some minor grammar issues, but nothing major or story-killing. I think it would be good to somehow incorporate a little bit more about Alexa (her background besides the drugs, how she got started on all this stuff, yadda yadda yadda) in the next chapter. The other xcharacters are good, and the story is definitely picking up. muy bien, hombre!

Then began to bite her cheek, I think you should write the "inside" of her cheek.

It was long, but that's good. a lot of dialogue, but that's okay.

Good start, write more.

oh and i think there's a random '6' at the bottom of this chapter.

xoxo cal

hey alex hon! what's up? sorry i haven't been able to return your review until now, but better late than never, right? i can't belive you deleted everything!

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Before the murders I had a good heart. Now, I don’t have one.

i like this line, however, i think you should add "now i don't have one AT ALL." it gives it more feelings, i guess. Well in my opinion.

okay, i really liked this intro. it seriosuly got me hooked in the beginning. however, i can't say the same about the last two paragraphs. they seem out of place.

Oh intriguing! write more soon! and read the lovely email i sent you!

Is this an autobiography of you?