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| Nacilme 2006-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseIt acctually reminds me of myself. I tend to dream too much... =) |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseaww, this is awesome. i love the last two lines. the way you repeat 'i am trapped' seems so desperate ... keep it up :) |