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Reviews For: Life's Ode to Death

Ironic Presence
2007-05-31
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abuseBRAVO! That was awesome! "Oh, Death, where is thy sting?" I love that line. ;) It's so true. Death is tiresome, death is fickle, childish and vain. Life will have the victory.
Rakasha Shadowfang
2007-03-06
ch 1,
abuse...wow...
and you called MY poem good this is some of the best poetry i've read in a long time
ohthevoices
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseAnd you said on your profile that poetry isn't exactly one of your strengths...lies! It was very powerful. Nicely done!
Kali Sword
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseLoved the rhyming scheme! T'was beautiful. And I loved the metaphors in it... very rich and original.

Thank you for sharing.

Liz
Karine Dragon'sheart
2006-10-31
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful, haunting, gorgeous and every other adjective dealing the majestic I can think of. Thank you so for reviewing Writer's Riddle 2; it's one of my favorites, and the answer is a date. The rhyme in this is absolutely a treat on this Hallow's Eve day.

Laters,

KD
A Disturbing Fancy
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseThis companion poem to Death's Ode to the living is no less adroitly accomplished. I like the first two lines of the last stanza very much, although the whole poem is great. I look forward to reading future odes!
bracelet-suicide
2006-10-21
ch 1,
abuseI like it, nice word choice :)
KimEh-3
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseBravo!

I have to comment on your use of "Thy". I have been trying forever, and ever and ever to use "Thy" in a poem and not have it sound like hymn. But you've pulled it off beautifuly, so my salute on that.

But other then the use of "Thy" the poem is very powerful, and I quite enjoyed it. ^_^
Porphyro's Madeline
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is fantastic, the rhymes are great, as are the questions in the last stanza. I absolutely love this, and am going to add it to my fave stories list.
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