Reviews for Don't try stopping what you fear

Reviews For: Don't try stopping what you fear

daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-01-18 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant. is the only word that comes to mind. Spelling and grammer was perfect, word structure was AMAZING, the whole thing was just so proffesional and so good and wow I really wasn't expecting that after the last essay! Much much better! You really should edit the other one so that it looks and sounds as sophisticated as this one:D I love it!
Formerly 2006-10-11 ch 1,	abuseOMG lol liek dont use chatspeak if u want to liek be taken seriously because it liek makes you sound like an idiot. Oh, and break your essay up into paragraphs, because solid blocks of poorly written text are annoying.
Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-10-09 ch 1,	abuseThis piece gives a voice to the repressed feelings I have been wanting to express for so long. Perhaps it is fear that holds us back, or whatever situation your in. Anyway, I like this piece, and if I can I'll add this to my favotires.
Taylary Daisuke 2006-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI literally only a five minute break, how should I spend them? I go to my e-mail and Ta-dA! Rosemistress wrote another non-essay essay. Yeehaa! This felt like if I was being lectured. It's great. Total mental analysis. Cause and effect, if only things were so simple. Sadly everything had a scale of difficulty. SOmetimes you think is better to just say nothing, but you're wrong. Sometimes you think is better to say everything, but you're wrong. But it is never correct to leave things half-way. Ack! Confusing, isn't it? I really b think you should stick to [one-shots] like this one. They're really good. If only i could write stuff like this, but since I'm the kind of person that lives with the "what if" alternative in mind, my essays would be so long it would be rendered confusing. Oh well, can wait for the next one.

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