Pshh, guys like him don't deserve friends at all. I liked how you made the word "Why?" stand out like that, it made the poem seem more powerful. Nice job on this one.

Nice job! I like how the poem flows. Man, that guy does treat you like shit.

Nice poem, you always keep in mind that one of the most important things in life is to spend time with people who make you happy and to ditch those who don't.

That's really good, but too bad that he couldn't be thankful for having someone that cared accept poetry flows so nicely too -

-SweetXBliss-