Hmm...I'd like to know why he left her. It's just difficult for me to grasp how after all the pain that she went through, she took him back without any explaination.

How long did he leave her for? Although "in that moment, she didn't care...," what happens when that "moment" is over? What happens next? How would she know that he won't leave her again?

The story is intriguing and it makes me curious to know more about this couple, but there isn't a lot of information to be gathered from. It'd be great if you added more details because the ending really didn't do justice to the rest of the story before that.

That is just what I think.

are you going to keep going on this story? it's quite good...

~A faithful reader and friend