Hey, sorry it took me so long to return the review. I thought this was really good, It kept me interested and the descriptions and flow of writing was good.

Oh, I like this so far. It's off to a good, convincing start, your characters are intriguing, and this whole business of "Tristan" loosing his memory is sure to lead to something big. Your grammar is very good, no mistakes I could pick up, and your wording is refreshingly accurate and uncomplicated. Overall, a good start. I'd find a title for it quick, though, because it's likely to be overlooked without an eye-catching name. I'll definately add this to my story alert list, so I can read more when you post more. Keep it up, I'm eager to know where this is going!

-Mad