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| riotmaker 2007-05-28 ch 1, | i love this. especially the last three lines. beautiful. and cruel. ♥ |
| My Tears Don't Fall 2006-10-09 ch 1, | Well, I'd say it was okay, but, in my opinion, the cussing was unnecessary and actually takes something away from the poem. Also, holocausts involve mainly fire or slaughter, so I'm not totally sure what you're trying to say. ~stlouisrams00 |