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| Reviews for your illegal in thirty eight states |
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   hail.the.bloocheese 7/3/07 . chapter 1..i feel somehow nostalgic, it's beautifully written in contrast to the dark subject matter. wonderful! |
| Last.Real Record Store onEarth 6/14/07 . chapter 1 "i'm sinning six ways to midnight tomorrow" I liked that one a lot, as well as the Motion City Soundtrack reference in there, one of my fave songs. Great job. |
| Her Wishing Well 4/6/07 . chapter 1 Amazing, i adore it! |
| just a ray of sunshine 3/16/07 . chapter 1 this set my heart racing and i love the line from the motion city soundtrack song. i lovelovelove them. i also loved the "(I play Russian roulette with a fistful of twenties & a temper full of heart break)" line. this was pretty incredible. |
| boys kiss girls 2/11/07 . chapter 1 I like this. Don't get me wrong, but I like the whole reference to the edgy teenage angst scene. Oh, and I also liked the lyric from Motion City Soundtrack tossed in there. Actually, I think I might go listen to that now. It's one of my favorite songs. And for some reason this makes me think of a somewhat scary Route 66. Very interesting... good job. |
| theoretically beautiful 1/9/07 . chapter 1 "(I play Russian roulette with a fistful of twenties & a temper full of heart break)" I don't know why but this lne makes me melt.. its great. |
| ShadesofBlue69 12/23/06 . chapter 1 and I like this too! It's very edgy, and I like how you tied the beggining of the poem to the end. nice job. |
| Sad Songs Remind Me 10/30/06 . chapter 1 I'm pretty sure that's an oral sex reference in there and it seems like a really awkward one at that. Not good. |
| riotmaker 10/23/06 . chapter 1 this is incredible. gorgeous writing. gorgeous poem. just all-over amazing. [adding to favorites] |
| klare 10/22/06 . chapter 1 i love it, like i really love, it's gruesome but beautiful. i would fav it but i never fav anything. great work. |
| Cheeseraptor5 10/19/06 . chapter 1 Whoa, that was really well-done. I had to improvise with the flow a few times, but I really liked your style. Excellent work. |
| dress her up in fairytales 10/10/06 . chapter 1 this should be made into a song. i can just hear it now - it reminds me a lot of songs that i've heard - but definitely in a good way. |
| MidnightStar005 10/10/06 . chapter 1 This I really, really LOVE! |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 10/10/06 . chapter 1 This was nice...the imagery just makes you reminisce about nights like that. "...thinking about his hips(and my teeth on them..." this scene is kinda ridiculous though, but I get what you're trying to say. But overall, I like this, and i'm not just saying it. Your metaphors are alot of fun to read so kudos! |
