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Simple Sensation 2009-05-08 . chapter 11
Heyy

Ok this specific story was the first one i read which was written by you. It was brilliant. I decided to give all your series a try and am reading them now in order. And when i compare your writing i think your writing style overall has improved. :) (Not that it was bad at the begining or anything, you know what i meant).

Anyways i love Adam. He's my favourite charactor, really hoping to read more about him!! I love his entire charactor, he seems so wise, but he's got weaknesses too.

So my overall requests are that you keep writing, and esp more about Adam please!! Your my new source of entertainment lol.

Oh and i also want to thank you - i've got my AS exams coming up soon, so i've been really stressed. I've been told to just calm down and do something relaxing to take my mind off it all (when i'm on breaks from revision etc). And well your stories are helping keep my mind of that. So thank you! :)
Grim Goodbye 2008-04-29 . chapter 11
Wow, whatta way to end this story! And, even better, with one of my favorite My Chem songs! I LOVE Famous Last Words! Again...THE PERFECT ending, THE PERFECT song!

I hope their'll be more fics with Michael and Adam, they're adorable!
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 11
Well, it's been nice. ^_^ I'm surprised you don't have more reviews! =D Your story-writing abilities are fantastic.
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 10
I've not read anything else of yours else so I don't know what sort of ending you prefer, but I think this one's going to be sad. Of course, I could be wrong; he could get better. It's your story, after all. I'm hoping for a good ending though, if it counts. ^_^
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 9
Well, I just learned that this looks like part of a series. O_o I guess I should go back and read them, since I haven't the faintest clue who some of these people are! I'm getting the gyst of it but all throughout the beginning I was getting the hint of an empty story, and now I know why. I haven't read it all! =P
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 8
Wow. =/ The trials and tribulations of a rocker... I can't believe Sonny has the strength to see his best friend dying and then, a few hours later, sing on a stage in front of tons of people. I'm a little confused about the anorexia part though... it's been two months, right? Can he really be so sick this quickly? I don't know anything about the symptoms, but I think he's dissolving rather quickly... It's just a little strange to me. Again, I don't know anything about anorexia though.
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 7
Wow. Poor Adam T_T

I still love your writing style. I actually believe I write with a similar style as it is now!!

How strange for Michael to rely on Sonny. I suppose it's true, but... it's so strange.
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 6
Oh no. I think I know what's coming next.

I like Sonny... and at the same time, I do not. He's getting in the way of the relationship, and that's not making me particularly happy. =/
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 5
I don't know about the relationships between them... but it seems a little fishy. I get that Adam slept with Sonny, but they still seem a little too close to me. Perhaps that's my young side talking, though. ^_^ I wonder if Michael knows about their closeness? I can understand friends, but even girls don't act that way toward each other...
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 4
I wonder why Michael didn't smell Adam's breath after he came out of the bathroom, unless he brushed his teeth and I skipped it or something.

Magazine people can be so spineless. I wish Adam wouldn't have to go through all this pain, though he's merely a story character...
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 3
Uh oh. Adam seems to have a problem with mood swinging... one minute he's fine, and it seems the next he's upset. That'a a little odd, but I'll believe it. ^_^

I wonder what'll happen next...?
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 2
Oh boy. Stupid board members. =/ Making a pretty boy like Adam lose some weight... the nerve of them!! I wish I could reach into the story and pluck their eyeballs out. T_T

I know he's going to do it, too...
Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Wow!! Already, I love your writing style. ^_^ I can find very few mistakes in your grammar and word diction, which impresses me greatly~!! =D

It was a short chapter, but I'm already entrapped in the web of this story.
merrymowmow 2007-03-04 . chapter 11
I was woundering when you're going to update.
Pintsize 2006-12-22 . chapter 11
wow.

...just...


wow.
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