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Reviews For: Beauty and the Beast
Inside Pandora's Box 2008-04-13 . chapter 1
Very nice.
I like how it's worded and how different yet the same you make them.
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I suddenly feel like watching the movie.
Elizabeth Shell 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
I liked it. Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite stories! I like how you showed how they compare and contrast.
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-11-15 . chapter 1
That is SO pretty! Wow. I love it! It's definitely my new favorite! I absolutely love Beauty and the Beast, and this just... wow, it's lovely!
phantom-jedi 2006-10-10 . chapter 1
A good use of an old fairy tale. One critism for you: it doesn't flow quite as well as it could. Try reading it aloud sometime: most poems have a cadence to them, a rhythm that drives it forward with the words. Not so much syllable count, but the stress on each word.

That said, it was a good poem. Keep it up!

phantom_jedi
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