That poor girl... at least she tried to fight cause I don't know if I would have. He's scary. I think that you have a really interesting plot line but that you need to do some more editing on your work. In some parts it's a little hard to understand exactly what's happening. Maybe a beta reader would help? Anyway I'm looking forward to the next update.

great story so far i really like it alot

i love your stories:]
...i almost typed 'and you' but that'd probably be kinda creepy, eh? XD

I just finished reading your other fic and I'm starting this now. I hear it's as great as the former one, I pray that it is...

Are you going to update anytime soon? This story is good so far...

great story! please update it soon. it seems really neat!!

haha i love his attitude! damn!

Excellent story so far. I love the way you use dialogue. It's realistic, set at a nice pace, and very well written. Good job on this!

~carm~

Please write more! I really like it. It's quite intriguing (I don't think I spelled that right) and I'm just waiting to find out where he's taking her. And Payam? Ooh, I sense a betrayal! Or maybe I'm just being weird, but, still, it's really good.

sounds cool so far hope u continue

wonderful story i absoutly love it, its different from the norm, and so awesome! i cant wait for more! yay for more- by the way your settings disable anonymous reviews, jut thought id tell you, please update soon!

Well this is not fair, I've read both your storys, and now I have to wait for a new chapter >__

haha. hello, no i am not a dude lol.
I'm janene. a girl:]
lol are you a dude?
This chapter is great, can't wait to read the rest:]
oh by the way, what is chimera?

sorry if that's a dumb question lol.
well thanks so much for the review!

-janene

My dear. I have changed my pen name from Alera Van Hexis to: Lady Alera Van Hexis. When attempting to contact me, do so under my new pen name. Thank you. I finished reading the final part of your story and thought it quite magical. Continue for your devoted readership. Thank you.

Lady Alera Van Hexis

I must say darling that your writing has improved since the last time I had the pleasure of reading it. Please continue writing this amazing novel and get to the good part (Helamis, Belle and Beau). Please check up and read my works soon. I hope to get them up soon. Hope to hear from you soon my dear!

Forever your faithful servant,

Lady Alera Van Hexis