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Miss-Scissorhands 2007-03-08 ch 2,	Hey, good start! Are you going to continue this? I'll put this on my Story Alert list just in case. Oh and thank you for not adding profanity and sexual content in it. :)
Yoi 2007-01-30 ch 1,	is this another short story? manz! ur short stories all feel like potential long stories ya knoe? i really liked the part where he held her hand. it's sweet :) marcum is so shy~ i've tried a dare like that too lolx
Cookie Jar 2007-01-26 ch 1,	Cute.
Ahemait 2007-01-14 ch 1,	you said that it's complete, but i totally think that you could expand this into a great story, like go into the details of the dare and carcum's 'rumored Murderer, the boy too cold to care about himself'-ness. but even if you don't, it's a great story. and thank you so much for your review on my story, i'm sorry i didn't return it until now.
Giallolino 2006-12-19 ch 1,	Thank for your review! Wow! I want more. There is definately a larger story here. It's almost like a short fiction or a manga series. And not that I at all live up to Marcum, but people have often described my physical features the way you decribed his, I just thought that was weird and interesting.
Ryumaru shogunate 2006-10-10 ch 1,	it wasn't bad dear! It was better than mine! If you are looking for a way to study for improvement though ... there are several excellent romance writers on my favorites list... slash romance but still. Its up to you check them out if you wish or learn on your own.You a great writer and I'm sure you'll succeed no matter what style or study you choose to pursue! Ryumaru

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