woah...bravo! c: hmm this is one of this site's very well written poem sadly it lacks attention c: well anyway I really like it! I love how the 2 poems react with each other it kind of reminded about two poems "The sheperd's love for a nymph" and "The nymphs reply to the sheperd" correct me if I'm wrong..those are written by two european poets in the mid 15 or 18th century can't really remember...anyway this poem really stands out and I think its really good c: