|Reviews for we could be equal|
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 10/10/06 . chapter 1
'every time i see you in the hallways of school, a part of me still wishes that nothing had ever happened'
i see him everyday too & i know it's hard. the last stanza was incredibly powerful.
' i just want you back'
something about that just hit me hard...i don't know what it is. your words in this one...to me, was kind of like saying
'i'm still hurt, but i want things to get better'
i love this piece.
'a part of me wants to wipe the sadness hidden in your eyes'
that line was really sweet. i wish i could think of another word. seems to me that you were a really good friend to have cared so much...
i just want to talk to him too...
| morbid-fantasies 10/10/06 . chapter 1
I loved this. You're, like, my poetic inspiration. Congrats on stealing my heart and prodding it with your pen/pencil/keyboard.