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| blueroseofice 2007-10-18 ch 1,  | abuseI love your writting! The way you arrange the words would be distracting if the poem its self wasn't perfect. Which it is, so the arrangement it good. Short poem that hits the nail on the head. |
| HeartofDiamonds 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abusewow..i've felt this way before. Good job. |
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseall questions i'd like to ask people. i like it, even though it's really short. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abusei can feel the definite feel of abandon in this. good work keep writing |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThe questioning aspect really enhances the relatability. I like the tone that you've created through the word choice. Well done. |
| CrazyTurtles 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. Really good job. |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuselikey.likey.likey! |
| kathleen30263 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseVery depressing D, but good. |
| not-really-susan 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds very desparate. Hope all is well with you :-) |
| braindead1345 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseSo pretty...okay not pretty,buit know. cool... |
| commemorativemisery 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseomg...this has me written all over it... this is soo good! keep up the good work!! |
| Ryumaru shogunate 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW! DARK... Just the way I like it! No hope for the masses! Keep up the god work! Ryumaru |