i have no words. you are my hero. i LOVED that!

Nice poem! It's really good, although I think it should have been longer because the last line is kind of abrupt and and the line before that ended with a period, so it was kinda weird. I love your choice of vocabulary though, the introducing sentences are great, they are just to fall in love with. The whole thing is easy to picture and that's what I like most about it...keep writing it's good!
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OMG, I love this poem! It is so cute! My favorite line was the last one- "I am in love with a vampire". It just ended it perfectly! Great poem!~Kaitlin

He cages me against the wall.He leans in toward me.-I like the first part of the verse, but the second probably should have a bit more...emotion.

Fluttering sensation.

Danger. Hunger, something.

There are some good parts, the ending is a bit weak though.

Feeling. You want to imagine this person and this vampire, the chemical reaction, the tightening grip of-

A quick sharp pain soon developes.A rush of adrenaline.The sensation of being hyper hits.

Maybe 'The rush of adrenaline'?

It needs a bit of tweaking, that's all.