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| controv3rsyxx 2006-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseit's nice and i really like the meaning about someone going on to achieve so much even though there are so many barriers that she has to cross. |
| Arfean 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abuseIt is a nice idea and to many people have probably had similar experiences. Perhaps it would have been better to have another scene showing what she achieved rather than merely stating what happened at the end. |