ery nice job here. i liked it muchly. i'll hafta come back and read some more of your work :P i'm adding you to my faves so i remember to do that

Beautiful poem...it was short, but the length worked in its favor.

Oh, shit. You are so fucking HILARIOUS!

‘lyk zomg!1! me and my made-up boyfriend almost died11!1! lyk a 18wheeler came right at us11!11'

hahahahahaha.

Thanks for the laugh! That was just what I needed.

Keep up the good work. The bigger the lie you make up, the better…..

Lurvles,

Your Ass-fucker!

Wow, this is a really good poem.

wow. that's really good. i especially like the first verse.

wow...love it!

Beautiful...