AW! that is so sweet! my grandma's last name was McCarthy. they were roudy(not spelled right) bandit-ey people. they rocked! i think that's where i get my craziness. but they were also good old Irish drunks. anywho great story. i wish that was my life!

you have no idea how much I love this story.

minor spelling and grammar problems, but you can fix those in editing!

Oh my gosh niki! I totally love this story! It's so awesome! I have nothing bad to say about it lol! I want a fairy tale ending like "Kelly"! It's so unfair, stupid real life lol! Love ya lots! Ashy! xoxo!

that was so cute! I love it! Awesomely done. I love the passing the notes through the window thing!

I wish I had a boy-next-door too. It would be so cool.*sighs* Cute story.

*.conni