hmm ... defianately interesting and not a plot i have seen alot, if any at all. You have me wondering where you are going with this, esp. Xavier's warning. Nice story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Aralinn

I must say that I love the way you write, and also that both of your stories are quite hilarious.

Now if we could only get you to update...
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Interesting. I likes it!

i think i read this story before.. and i'm still hoping that you will update.. so pretty please? it's so good so far and i'm impatient and excited for your next chapter. so do a girl a favor and UPDATE!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA! love ur story!

the first chapter is really intresting so update soon!

This is actually really intruiging. I can't wait to find out what is so different about the Ferial's. Oh, and I do hope that you'll update soon. The last time is quite a while ago...

And I absolutely loved the interactions between Shannon and her stepbrothers. It was amusing. So, get to work and start writing. I NEED to know how it goes on.

Wow. Just. WOW. xD

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i liked that chapter nicely done update

Oh... ^^ Me likes story hehe. Updaye soon?

i hav 2 say i lyke ur way of writing in this story, it'z more 2 the point and u can't call the chapters "fillers", anywayz keep up the updates!

Ha ha I love this story. It's so unrepentantly mysterious in so lame ways, but not lame! I'm not sure how you managed that! If you update again soon I'll give you a lollipop!

i like this story. i hope you continue it.

I practically read all you stories in one sitting, except for one I believe. Anyways, I'm really curious about this one. I can't wait 'till you post another chappy!

Awesome start, I like this. UPdate this and Foxified soon please!

I like this a lot! I thought her reaction was priceless... and I'm assuming you meant “You creep(ed) me out before, and you still creep me out now.” ...I loved that line. Update soon?