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boys kiss girls 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
I really like this. It could potentially remind me of me... well, the first half of it at least. Not really one for bleeding.

I also like how it's abstract but formatted at the same time. Good job.

P.S. I love the lyrics on your bio page. I saw them and then I just had to listen to the song. =)
i'll ask the stars above 2006-11-03 . chapter 1
i like it though. the beginning of the second line killed me, it's amazing.
polka dots and addictions 2006-10-20 . chapter 1
gorgeously written. The haiku format doesn't seem forced in any way & its nicely formatted. Nicely written. ~Bex xx
poetic abortion 2006-10-18 . chapter 1
Pretty pretty pretty; I am over run with the pretty.

You make me like haikus, that is enough said for us all, I think.

~* Noelle
Basara 2006-10-13 . chapter 1
O.O ...

nice...
Chaos Apple 2006-10-11 . chapter 1
No, no, this is gorgeous, darling, simply wonderful. The way you formatted it was interesting-you employed a lot of the techniques I myself use, only, you use them better.

The only problem I saw was the authors note-ugh. I HATE when people do that! You just wrote a great piece and then you RUIN it by adding that stupid little-lmfao. Sorry, it just really bugs me. A lot of great poets on this site make the same mistake-just don't do it! Say No!

I was SO disappointed to see that you were one of THOSE poets. Really, it'd add so much more power to the piece if you just didn't use the Authors note!

♥ Alice
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