This very little piece just added you to my favorite authors list. How unbelievably powerful two lines can be. I was expecting a full poem, especially on such a topic, but this far outdid anything I expected. How a couple of words put together can have such a meaning, how relationships in our society are taken for granted. Just elegant, powerful, just overall well done. Thank you for sharing.

this is so powerful

its only two lines

but it's overly powerful

great job :D

bekah

rather short wasn't it? otherwise good though. read my storys!