FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Treblesome Kylie 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this. Even though the Mona Lisa is a common use, it shows what you see in the painting. Questions like, Is she smiling? Is she sad? Did da Vinci want to portray her as a beauty in his realism?, are answered in your point of view. I especially like your fourth stanza: it captures the truth perfectly. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite line is "free this aching heart". Well worded. I think you described a "Mona Lisa Soul" very well. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Angela Loves. 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseMona Lisa Soul: Sounds so nice, it seems like you own a portrait of Mona Lisa... |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseSo true and so beautiful!! |
| Abella 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseDifferent idea, but nice. I especially like the line "imprisoned by perception." Well worded I think. |
| elisefey 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I'm always surprised by the elegance of your poetry. Both the thoughtfulness and wording because it sounds so different from the way you talk and yet its still very much your emotions and who you are. I like being able to see that part of you come out in your writing. If that made sense... |