Reviews for Damsel in Distress

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Your Impatient Stalker 2007-03-03 ch 6, anon.	abuseI noticed you haven't updated! It's just as bad as having to wait for the author of the Queen of Glass to update! 'Don't leave me up so high, on such a breakable thread' from one of Avril's songs, Happy Ending I think... Update! I'll find out where you live...oh, and I know what you did last summer.
somuchformyhappyending 2007-02-18 ch 3,	abusethis was so great! reading on...
somuchformyhappyending 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abusehey! so you put my story on your favorite's list and I wanted to check out some of your work and I'd like to say that this was a very good first chapter! It really drew me in! bec
Marissa 2007-01-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseomg! i love ur story, its so cute!
madly in like with you 2007-01-07 ch 6, anon.	abusehi! i just started reading your story i think it's all kinds of awesome! XD! i'm really really enjoying it! and by the way your old friend kerry the toe-biting maniac sounds a lot like me... except for the toe-biting part but she's got the maniac part all down! lol... please update as soon as it's possible for you! (no pressure though :]) cause i really wanna find out what happens next! or the maniac in me will pop out (toe-biting and everything) lol. BYE! sits patiently and waits for update
a bitter kiss. 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abusehere I am, returning the review you left me. Thanks so much. :D [The last car that did had a butt sticking out of the passenger window and I don’t really know why, I guess they didn‘t stop at the gas station, but I covered my eyes in case of some flying doo-doo.] Hahahaha!! That was so funny! Luckily, I've never had that happen to me. :D Who could this mystery driver be... hehe.
loves him 2007-01-02 ch 6,	abuseahh. Absolutely lovely. There were a few typos here and there, but I still enjoyed your chapter immensely. Haha, Ben was so jealous of Joe at the beginning. Aww. And what a cute little scene at the end with the two of them. Wonderful! xD
Kiara Asukara 2007-01-01 ch 6,	abuseHOLY GREAT MOTHER GODDESS, THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER! OMG, May Lisa, I loved it! It was adorable! Haha, and nice bit at the end... Kerry the "toe-biting maniac". LOL. I was giggling maniacally. For about five-ten minutes, give or take. heehee. You had better update as soon as possible, man!! Soon! Or I'll sic Brandi on you! lmao. And we know her stalking skills... evil cackle And your'e welcome for my support. :) Thanks for yours, mi amiga. And HA, I did update, finally!! It's about time, huh. Well,hurry up and update soon, May Lisa!! ~The Kait of Lin
Impatient Reader 2006-12-29 ch 6, anon.	abuseYou sure did update fast. Clever with the end and all, with the pinning to the counter and the brushing of the hair...Why must you leave me on cliff hangers?!
loves him 2006-12-29 ch 5,	abusehm. I guess that I must have not noticed another chapter until now. ooh, thanks for the review. But anyway, onto your story. I have officially decided that Eleanor is one of those cute people that I want to take home with me in a jar. I'm glad that they're going to Sedona cuz I was wondering what they would do when they got nearer to Eleanor's home. Ahh, I feel like callng her Ellie or something just because it's shorter and I'm lazy as heck. Sorry, just a andom thought of mine, but great job on this chapter.
Rosalina 2006-12-27 ch 5,	abuseThanks for the review! (: anyway, love the story so far. can't wait to see where the story heads. i do have one question...in the prolouge Eleanor said she had no phone, but in the first chapter her mother called her on a cell phone. just something i noticed. anyway, other than that it was great. can't wait for the next update.
loves him 2006-12-26 ch 4,	abuseaw. Fluffiness all around.
loves him 2006-12-26 ch 3,	abuseArgh. Fictionpress is being weird and I had to push the little button to review like ten times to get the window to appear. Grr. Anywho, this is such a lovely chapter. I loved Eleanor and Ben's conversations, like when they were at the gas station. The only thing that I would suggest is using a few more contractions like where you wrote: "As long as there is food!" I say, in a singsong voice. Put 'there's' instead of 'there is'. Of course, you don't have to because what you have is gramatically correct, but the shorter word just sounds more...more like something that someone of Eleanor's age would say. But it's just a suggestion. Anywho, great chapter.
loves him 2006-12-26 ch 2,	abuseThis chapter wasn't too eventful and their wasn't a cliffie at the end either, but it's definitely useful in finding out about the characters. And I like Eleanor, she sounds shy but like one of those really cute people that you wish you could put in a jar and take home and then look at them all the time and wonder about how cute they are. haha, that's just my thought. But anywho, I like your character Eleanor. =]
loves him 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start. She's stuck, poor poor girl. haha, and the butt part. I was cracking up.

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