Very thought-provoking!

You're making me have a 'philosophical moment' right now :)

Very deep...

Being with someone doesn't necessary

make one feel whole.

I liked the emptiness you expressed in

a few sentences.

haha brilliant again! i love it!

Very nice. Great job!

sweet...

nice...

o! This is good! I like this haiku! Its really good..you write some pretty good haikus, b/c really I'm not a big fan of them, but this however is really god..its simple, but yet it says a lot..and that just makes it beyond "awesome" (i do believe last time i used the word *superb* ;) haha)

I loved it all! *keep writing* hope to see you've posted something new

AND STOP DELETING! *shesh* this one is good! I said so, so there should be NO doubt in your mind that it isn't good..(haha, don't i put myself on a high pedistool? lol) I shall ttul! buhbyes

Britney

*adds story to favorites* :D