Very nice! I like it alot. 'ba dump' is cool! I think I can hear it.

Wonderfully written, this piece has so much life to it. The line, "The concerto of paper and pen begin" is especially great. Very well done, I enjoyed this a lot. Keep writing.

Many misunderstood - thank you ever so much! I agree with all of my soul! this is beautiful, in a poets words, put to rythm & i know where you're coming from.

With love, IFoS