The characters have a lot of depth, which, in my opinion, is quite hard to achieve in a oneshot. Lovely description of the setting, and throughout the story, the mystery leaves the reader thinking. Keep writing!

NC

Hmm. This is intriguing. I really odn't know what else to say about it. It's good and mysterious and...intringuing. I still have no idea where he is or who they are, but that's part of it's appeal, isn't it?

Dude... I FINALLY got to read it! I'm so happy! And it's everything that I expected it to be ^^ I mean, GEEZ! So very... psychological? Yes, that's the word. I luff it! And yeah... eheh... *Is so handicapped that she can't leave a proper review... but you already know this XD*

Lol, yeah... uh... I gots the Skillz of a Ninja!