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Lost In Context 2006-10-11 . chapter 1
This is awesome. The last two lines are definitely my favorite. "I find myself distracted/ by the heartbeats in the walls." Reading it again, I suppose it could be taken as a sinister kind of poem, but I like to think of it more of as a reminder that anything can live.

(On an entirely random note, this reminds meof a really cool book I once read called "A Stir of Bones".)
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