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| Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abusequite good i have to say. nice writting too. great job. ~*evanescence123*~ |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-06-28 ch 16, | abuseI feel like telling this to my mom all the time! |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseLolz, funny and true. |
| moonsliver86 2007-06-28 ch 18, | abusethis limerick started weak in the beginning but gained momentum at the middle and ended really well; i enjoyed this... keep writing more limericks |
| S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G. 2007-06-22 ch 18, | abuseOoh, please continue these, they're quite fun to read! I love limericks... and these are perfect. |
| Candyfloss Victim 2007-01-23 ch 3, | abuserotting brains? how odd |
| Candyfloss Victim 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abusehow true how true! im still waiting for some promised reviews lol... |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 18, | abuseYeah, it sounds like a whim. Dice is ... nice? Not the first word that comes to mind ... still true, though. I suppose not much else rhymes with "Dice" though. ^^ That's one of the reasons I stay far away from rhyming. That, and we aren't allowed to use it in Creative Writing and it defeats the point if I'm not allowed to use my poetry in class. Yeah. I enjoy these limericks. They're all a bit ridiculous, if only because they have to rhyme. Most of them flow naturally, though. So it doesn't sound too forced. Nicely done, Fen! Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 17, | abuseI can see someone rapping this. Is that a bad thing? Ha ha ... Kumquat ... ^^ Silly and light-hearted. This is how I imagine limericks are meant to be ... Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 16, | abuseYeah. Also a true story. Sometimes people are flipping ANNOYING! But then they can be your greatest inspiration when you're trying to work. *shrugs* It goes either way. Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 15, | abuseHuzzah, Fen, huzzah! I'm glad something was learned from this tragic episode of depression on your part. Good for you. And also good to see the limericks (maybe) taking a turn for the happier. Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 14, | abuseI'm sorry about the hole in your soul, Fen. I hope it's gone now ... otherwise, I might be forced to badly sew the hole shut. Then you can be whole in your soul. And ... be able to walk on your soles again? Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 13, | abuseYay rain! I enjoy the rain badly. Thanks for writing a limerick that describes my feelings ... Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 12, | abuseHee. I know that "Wyrd" kid. Crazy. It's true. I like that about your limericks, though. You can see Fen through Fen's own eyes through the ... rhymes. Quite unqiue situation there. Felicia. |
| felicia13 2007-01-19 ch 11, | abuseYeah. I know the feelings of this poem, too. It's like ... rawr. Because no one really understands and you don't really want to tell anyone to begin with. Yeah. Well done. Felicia. |